You've got me feeling maimed
and a little more than superstitious
as if my head were a puritanical pumpkin
or my name were anxious alouwishus

I'm crucified to your anchor
for all intent and purposes
I wonder after your wealthy ocean floor
as I'm sliding below
your sentient velvet surfaces

I'd hang myself with a Bible belt
if my saviour were my stalker
I can't burn in your visceral hell
from salty Davy Jones' locker

How can either of us mend our opinions
when our similar devils share familiar minions
holy rollered and jolly rogered I cannot salute the rebel pirate flags that wave
pinioned in the stocks within my deep and watery grave.


(Written after visiting Gloucester ,MA and then watching the film 'Searching For The Wrong-Eyed Jesus' and pondering how two halves of America deal with racism,religion and witches.Wow.Then I took some aspirin for the ensuing headache.)

Once again another one well done. ***gives thumbs up*** and I think after pondering what you pondered I would have required a whole bottle of Excedrin.

LOL, excedrin chaser, tyvm for reading Pos, always appreciated!!

Your very welcome. I love the usage of words and the depth of your writing.

Yo ho, that was effin' awesome!!! (korny I know but that just the mood Im in tonight,sorry)

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when our similar devils share familiar minions

I like this part! very cool wordage, lol. I could read your stuff over and over...

I absolutely love this! Shake those tail feathers Pen!

LOVE LOVE the title. Awesome write. Of course I need to go look up a couple of words now LOL. Love getting inside that head of yours

Fan,korny works,lol!Thanks for readin'

Lil, i was hoping someone would enjoy that line,and pls read as many times as you want,lol,that's what I'm here for!!Tyvm!!

Tyvm,Q! *shakes* LOL!

Michele,it took me like, 8 times to type the title correctly,rofl..TYVM!!!

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Wow,great saved me the time.

this is perhaps
is my favorite

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rofl,I didnt post on your thread and erase myself.I didnt change my name and get weird again,so YOU let it go whatever the **** it is.

i could not ever find words to justify
ur writtings,this one is mesmerizing

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rofl,I didnt post on your thread and erase myself.I didnt change my name and get weird again,so YOU let it go whatever the **** it is.

that double person is very strange

keep up the awsome word spins, pen!