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I haven't written anything in a while, didn't have a need to I guess, but I'm not sure this is finished yet but thought I'd share for some feedback before I give this to the intended person. Thanx for any help.
 My necotic heart I can't say I didn't see this coming you can't say I didn't worn you but still I don't want to be the one to tell you I'm not jealous you know that's just not me our eternal bound will never be broken no matter the why but you can't see what she's doing to you you've changed so I don't think you'll hear me crying out your pain She's not the one she's just not right for you I used to like her too now all the lies have turned my heart necrotic with you I can see you drowning my line is out of reach I can see you falling my arms are not there to catch you I don't know what to do Do you want to know what she told me do you deserve such mysery I can't bare to be the one to show you tell you what's she's done she's trying to break us apart she doesn't get it our eternal bound will never be broken she doesn't like it Dear brother can you open your eyes and see me my arms are getting tired but I'll keep holding on forever you don't deserve this you're so happy I'll thrust the dagger quickly maybe you won't feel she's lieing to you can't you count to 9 I know you want this someday it will be true you're smiling so brightly but the child is not yours please know I love you but she's not the one for you my collapsing heart is heavy I didn't want to tell you ~kickass ~A stranger is a friend I haven't met yet. "I can see an ***hole from miles away, stand them next to me and I'm blind" |
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great write
Adopt me Lisa! : ) ~~ Me Lisa's # 1 Fan in Texas! met LMP 6/28 in Dallas,tx austin tx 10/16/06    http://www.myspace.com/lmfp_snoopy1 http://www.myspace.com/lmfp_snoopy_johnnyramone4 |
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Whoa!!! thats deep, it really cuts right thru...
good one!  -----------------------------------  "I see your disguise and the Fear in your eyes Just compromise Stop painting your faces" ~ A.M. |
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Great job Kicka$$.
And your siggy rocks...What is that from? Or did you so cleverly make that up? I love it  |
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Thanks guys!
Yes Syd my sig is my own personal sayings. I found I generally get along with everybody and having worked with the public alot I found everybody starts to look the same so I can't remember for sure if I've met them before...lol. So that's sort of where I came up with the "A stranger is a friend I haven't met yet." The other one was inspired by LMP and my sister, and looking back on past relationships. It's sooo true, and it works for me. It just came to me once when I was talking to my sister."I can see an ******* from miles away. Stand them next to me and I am blind" ~kickass ~A stranger is a friend I haven't met yet. "I can see an ***hole from miles away, stand them next to me and I'm blind" |
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Thank you for sharing.
  http://eventful.com/demand/D0-001-000171050-1 Thank You Suzana For My Beautiful Avatar & Blend!!! http://www.myspace.com/mj_lmpgirl |
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Nice job
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Good work my friend!
Love, Bam  Hawt **** Bam new - my professional myspace profile OutImpact.com Saw & Met LMFP: Myrtle Beach, SC July 28, 2003 the day after my 22nd birthday! & 5/4/05 & 11/19/05 Ft. Wayne, IN was also loud and proud in Chicago, IL 11/22/05!!! I'm going to put the mic down and step back so you can think about what I just said. |
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*~thats really good u should post more of ur work~*
_________________________ If what they say is true You’re a boy - and I'm a girl I will never fall in love with you!! PROUD! http://www.myspace.com/profile_of_a_crazy_teen |
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