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Stars, can you see the stars? So bright in the sea above.
Spinning 'round my head in a swirl that fades like the tornados of hurt into vacuous space.
Yet I'm still falling from the highest cliff, so high the rock scrapes the heavens.
But god took one look at me and cast me down, descending forever til i hit the groud. with a jump and a shot of adrenaline running through my veins, i looked up and all I saw was your face.
For the first time i bowed my head and prayed.
I prayed to god not to take you away,
ooo oh no. no, no.

God heard my prayers and allowed my contentment as I stared in your eyes as they sparkled like gems. Like the stars in the sky brilliant and green til one day, fade away and abandon the sea.
I can't feel and I can't speak, my father was right that love is the cornerstone and this life is filled with frivolous things.

The way that you held me,
and I'll never the way that i felt to know what this life meant.
And it was beautiful dear,
it was beautiful dear.

The sun, can you see the sun, so bright peaking through the sea of darkness to bring new life.
But I'm falling, I'm falling, I'm falling.
and you're not there, doll.
I've hit the bottom and this can't be real.
Where am I?
This can't be real.
Who am I?

thats cool. ...

I really like this, keep up the great work.

Ooooh, I like that!!

Nice job.

very nice TCB! Hope you've been doing good!

This is really nice, thanks for sharing.

hey lil!!! it's great to see you! i've been doing pretty well. school is busy but second semester starts next week so that means i'm half way finished!!! whohooo!!! how have you been?

thanks for comments everyone

very nice work tcb

wow love it !