this is a draft of a poem i wrote to remember my sister on her birhtday today, just thought i'd share

" today in memory of you"

your life was taken to save mine
so many years ago
a lose i can not find the words
to define,
somedays i wish to trade places with you
for the better one was taken while the misfit
was left behind, we were just two little sisters
we shared everything,even the same dreams
til the same monster that helped give us life took
you away, though he is paying dearly, my scars remain
i'm sure your up above feeling no pain and all your scars
have been taken away,
for that i'm happy,
but i can't erase the memory of you
not that i want to, i will forever miss you
my dear sister cause on this day you were born
and brought lots of joy, you were older then i and
knew so much more then me. so if your looking down on
me today show me how not to miss the sis that was taken away
to save me,

lmfp_snoopy2006

Thanks for sharing .

Hugs, Dutch

That's beautiful Snoop

x x x

thanks bunches dutch and lmp fan for looking

That's really nice snoopy!

Awsomeness lisa fans are soooo f'in talented really...

Snoopy,

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

thanks for reading

snoopy that is really good. ...

Thats really sad Snoopy...I hope ur ok...Good job tho

thanks much for reading syd
i'm doing k i guess

yeah i havent seen you in chat ...or maybe i have ...but you have been quiet. .... snoopy...

thanks for reading maj,

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Originally posted by LMFP_Snoopy:
thanks for reading

Your welcome.

This is beautiful Snoopy! Hugs for you! X