I just wrote this one and I am still teaking it and I wrote it more for a song.

Baby why don't you look at me
baby why don't you see me
baby will you watch me bleed

Let's talk our lives out and then I'll
sit back while you feed

Grab the hammer and nail me to the floor
so you can say hello to the demons you left in me

Wash your hands dear, my juices might stain your mind set and cause you to love me again

Ask the waiter for the check while you try to hid my humiliation. Box up what's left of
my pride so you can enjoy it as your final consumtion later

Baby why don't you look at me
baby why don't you see me
baby will you watch me bleed

good write WC

Very cool Silentscreams, love your sig name too. I am "Silentwoman" on a poetry site, lol.

And muchas hairy a$$'s snoopys!!