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Black trunks scarred across blank white heaven
black ink strikes,an upward gift of thorns from the dark earth itself
The huge pines wield their shipwreck grandeur
swaying branches (spell) casting fistfuls of wet diamonds against my humble window

days like this rebuild myth and prayer
strike fisherman dead
ancient with monsters anew
crush the inland with boughs of unkempt lullabyes of fury

I stay inside
listening to squawks of crow-distress
black wings banking constantly against countless tides of thrashing slate and periwinkle
I remember so clearly, things I've never been through
I stay wrapped/rapt just beside the window on the short bed in a grey blanket
I stay warm-fingered with cupfuls of bad-lung-remedy and flutter-dove-like brain geishas
The storm fragments into mini-squall offenses
strategic hisses and two points of deadlight where my distant gaze sprouts eyes

Inside I am disrobed
dismantled
untethered
the storm is howling wet and unthundered
I am perched at the foot of it's appeal
unsacrifice in a dark room offering up no candlesmoke
no canticle
all swollen feet and catharsis
I drown in slow mouthfuls of ice
unconscious caution like gruel

I am the barefoot mythmaker
tentacle not-caught, cauldron-spent witness
to just another crock of storm
simply not come for me.

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The drop dead dream, the Chosen One
A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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I could NEVER write such stuff just outta my head. I mean it as a compliment Big Grin That is sure some smart poetry, I like it Smiler


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*Sigh* Pen! When do you plan on publishing your poetry? I will be amoung the firsts in line.






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*~^^ ill be right behind ya lol~*

*~another great write pen <3~*


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Indre ,Thank you, I do take that as a compliment,lol..tyvm Big Grin

Darlin' it's gotta be soon...I got book just pouring out of me...I walked into the middle of the room tonight and just hollared,LOL,Bree mumbled.."ayuh,labour pains."LOLOL


Sammy,you're a doll...Thanks for readin' you guyses. Big Grin



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The drop dead dream, the Chosen One
A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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I love this.

After I read it I went back to the subject line. If you are to title this, I'd make it a place comma year - that would be really cool.

xox,
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Good thing it's dated, or I'd be lost..LOL..*needs some ginko* Wink Red Face



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The teenage queen, the loaded gun
The drop dead dream, the Chosen One
A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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Yep, that's grey.. But beautiful

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So now that you have made a mess off me
And show me stars that I have never seen
I know it's wrong why does it feel so right
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LOL It sure was ,but it made for good fodder for my brain mill...LOLOL...Tyvm Dutch!!



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The drop dead dream, the Chosen One
A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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Big Grin Thank you.



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A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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I like it pen
 
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Smiler tyvm Teardrop

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The drop dead dream, the Chosen One
A southern drawl, the world unseen
A city wall and a trampoline



 
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