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IT'S HARD FOR ME TOO WRITE THIS
SINCE TIME HAS SLIPPED AWAY
IT'S BEEN FIVE YEARS SINCE YOU PASSED
AND I REALLY MISS YOU SO
I'M GROWN NOW
SINCE THE LAST TIME YOU TOUCHED MY FACE
MOM,
I KNOW I'VE LET YOU DOWN
FROM MY TROUBLES OF TODAY
BUT I DON'T WANT TO WORRY YOU
FOR WHAT I FEEL INSIDE
I KNOW YOU'LL ALWAYS BE PROUD OF ME
AND THE ACCOMPLISHMENTS I'VE MADE
BUT I'VE SLIPPED AND I'M TRYIN TO FIND MY WAY
I JUST WISH I COULD TURN BACK TIME
SO YOU CAN HELP ME SEE
THAT ALL MY PAIN AND LONELINESS WILL SOON BE SET FREE
BUT I KNOW I'M GROWN NOW
AND I HAVE TO PAVE MY WAY
ALL I WANT TO SAY TO YOU
IS HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU AND STILL MISS YOU SO
BUT MOST OF ALL
I MISS THE WAY YOU TOUCHED MY FACE
I LOVE YOU MOM
 
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Tucker,

You did a great job on this poem. Thank you for sharing.





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That is so touching poem ..
 
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OMG...I am crying my eyes out right now because when I read it for some reason I heard my sons voice. WOW.


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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That is great. You have me in tears and not many things can make me do that. Keep writing.


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Hey! That was wonderful!! I know how you feel, here's the one I wrote for my mom after she'd been gone ten years....

On This Day Ten Years Ago….

The pain of losing you hurts more than I can say,
You are ached for and sorely missed every second of every day.
You are my mother & my fathers’ wife,
You are the one that brought me into this life.

It’s been so long since from you I have been kissed,
Whenever I see your face - it always fades into the mist.
It hurts so much that you’re not here,
I often wonder which way my life would steer.

I can never to anyone fully explain,
How I feel about losing you & the pain.
But it’s not all sadness and misery,
Because you are still with me in the lilacs & cardinals in the trees.

I thank you for caring for and loving me,
I thank you for teaching me to love more than my eyes can see.
I will cry for you until there are no more tears,
But the lessons losing you have taught have taken me through the years.

As I hold my daughter and feel the indescribable love,
I know that you and Dad are smiling from up above.
Having Kaitlyn has helped me to forgive,
So that the memories I have now make me smile as I live.

On this day ten years ago,
You died and my world seemed to slow.
I hope that you still know that I love you like no other,
There is no one that will ever take the place of you, my mother.



Written by
Dorothy C. Jury
April 22, 2002

Yours made me cry too. It never goes away, does it? Frowner


I am me because of all I've been through,
My soul has been ripped & torn apart.
But if you ask me, I will shelter you,
Because I always live through my heart.
 
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