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I am just gonna move my 2 new pieces to this thread so hopefully people will read them.
Not going to call you tonight Until then my stage to fright My life, my woe and care Are not for you anymore to share You run thru my head, thoughts of you I dread Should have just called in dead You swim round and round Need to put you under my brains ground To me you are the air I breathe Just can’t believe it’s all make believe How could I feel this way so soon? All day from noon to the moon I feel your every word in my soul I now know I’ll never be whole Swimming around within my mind Knowing unto you I cannot bind Talking to you lifts my mood Without I am left to brood Vegas is far but yet so near I call to you but am left to fear What does the future hold? I think of you often, can’t I just be bold? Miss your words within my ear Maybe I’ll see you in a year Until then my heartbeats stop Seeing you makes my jaw drop You’ll never know what you mean to me For that I can not let you see Until then my dreams are mine I’ve given you my best line To hook and sink until I think My soul turns to drink I hope to see you just once again My mind races toward your sin Your beauty I can not hold Cannot be bought or even sold Wanting you leaves everything else dull Life is full of void and null But these things will never be Cuz you would finally see the real me    ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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Slipping further into danger
I reach out to another stranger Thoughts slip further down as I struggle again Can’t face the fact I can’t get u to let me in Needs and despair intertwine as one My cuts to scars not to be undone I feel as if I no longer matter Raping my brain with masses of clutter Cuts they bleed to feel alive Down I spiral into a death dive Time goes by, as death sits in my chair I just can’t shake my thoughts of despair Pull the plug of the tub within my thought Reaching out is only for naught Can’t get her out of my head Wanting nothing but to stay in bed The light from the night is too bright I have lost my life, far from sight To drink does not quench my thirst Unto this I am not the first My insides turn to dust, without I cannot, I must My emotions are broken down until they are bust Thoughts of rage consume my brain Is there nothing to stop this pain? To swerve and learn round the turn Pictures of you I shall trash and burn Can’t take it, can’t shake it, tired of having to fake it Here is everything it’s yours so just break it I can’t I shan't I do and I don’t I’ll never learn, for you I won’t ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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Good job on them both I really like the second one!!
  _   ______________________ Each dream in your heart lies within reach if you just believe in yourself! Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt and dance like nobody's watching. --- Anon http://www.myspace.com/posnsgr ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sparks Nugget Nov. 3rd & 4th |
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 That is SOO POWERFUL!! Well Done "I paint my own reality. The only thing I know is that I paint because I need to, and I paint whatever passes through my head without any other consideration. " ~ FRIDA KAHLO  |
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 They are both dark and passionate - which I totally identify with .... your dispair can be felt through these words .. WOWZA!!! Great job Grumpy1 - Thanks 4 sharing your words/feelings with all of us "I paint my own reality. The only thing I know is that I paint because I need to, and I paint whatever passes through my head without any other consideration. " ~ FRIDA KAHLO |
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that y'all very much for your kind words.
it is hard for me to share cuz i am afraid of what will be said, but i am open to feedback on whether they flow well or not. ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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Bump!
_ ______________________ Each dream in your heart lies within reach if you just believe in yourself! Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt and dance like nobody's watching. --- Anon http://www.myspace.com/posnsgr ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sparks Nugget Nov. 3rd & 4th |
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I really enjoyed this,thank you very much for posting it.
UNITED WE STAND, ONE FORUM UNDER LISA~LMP ROCKS!   To Try an[d Fail is Part of Life. To Fail to Try is Unforgiveable!<br /> http://www.elvis-presleys-kingdom.com (epk) Site UPDATED 5-25-08 TONS OF PICS Elvis/Lisa Forum http://elvisking1999.yuku.com/ TONS of photos (scanned by me) added 05-23-08 EXCLUSIVE NEW PHOTOS not seen elsewhere...Enjoy! . http://www.myspace.com/elvis_presleys_kingdom  'you must become the change that you'd like to see in the world...'"I take care of the vultures with a glass of wine." Any Day 6ft Above Ground is a Good Day! LOLConcentrating on the rightness brings more rightness. "If a person thinks he can be happy without making those around him happy, he's crazy." -L. Ron Hubbard To try and fail is part of life. To fail to try is unforgivable.  Ugly comes from within...take a long look at yourself. NO need to show off. I SO DISLIKE "victims" of their own making.  I know. I saw the emails, some people never change. I hope it was worth it and your happy now. LOL |
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thanx for the bump and thanx for the kind words
*grumpy1 blushes* ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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Your welcome
 (bump)_ ______________________ Each dream in your heart lies within reach if you just believe in yourself! Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt and dance like nobody's watching. --- Anon http://www.myspace.com/posnsgr ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sparks Nugget Nov. 3rd & 4th |
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thankies for the bump
~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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_ ______________________ Each dream in your heart lies within reach if you just believe in yourself! Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt and dance like nobody's watching. --- Anon http://www.myspace.com/posnsgr ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sparks Nugget Nov. 3rd & 4th |
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thank you very much for the supposrt.
i should be finding out this week if and what i previously wrote got published ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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here is a new one:
You let go just as I was sinking in The end was here just as it started to begin Every outline and trace of your face Within my dreams haunted with no erase My heart is a Cinderella with no shoe to fit Princesses are dark images, super imposed bit by bit I never thought of you to be the one Sometime soon maybe I’ll sleep under the sun Moonlight hides my shattered dream aside Pouring out of my soul liked wicked cyanide Knowing you was great, yet I must wonder Unto you, what was my biggest blunder? To cast you aside, like you did to me Is something that I just can not be Liar’s moon or dyer’s eve I drank you in, or so I was led to believe I am still a shell of my former self Do not think for a second you belong on my shelf We are who we are whether we live or let die Lucky are those who can feel alive Memories fade not like childhood toys Can’t shut you out of my mind’s frantic noise ~~the ace of brats~~ : )- Capri thinks I'm cool <*Well you know once I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken *> A wise man knows more than he talks...But a fool often tells more than he knows |
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