Thou creapist in those feeble of mind and spirit
those too weak in the spine to hold themselves up.
They look for a leader to give them strength, and they seek shelter in you
Closed of mind, and hiding in their God
they use you for their excuse.
How easy it is to manipulate them
for they have no spirit to guide them, just you.
They withstand the cruelest of sites , the killing of their own, because it has reason to them.
They blast those that see the truth, and follow a different road, that of peace.
You will win their soul in the end
for they have given it willingly, without a fight.
So easy for you to glean these foul souls
but you will not have mine, for I fight for those that have hope, and believe, and follow the light, not you.
You are FEAR
AND YOU RULE STILL IN THE HEARTS OF MANY.
BUT YOU WILL NOT RULE MINE

Great job!

NICE WORK!!!!

Thank You Guys!

The conscience is heavy with guilt
crazy thrashing to make it right.
Buried in words, and a crocodiles' smile
you make your way into peeps hearts and build your nest
spreading your toxins and poisoning the soul
feeling pleasure at their gullibleness
you slither amongst goods souls
hiding in thier trust.
Out demon, you are found.

Bubble bubble toil and trouble,
you stir your brew, and cast your spells
fooled only 2, many see the true you.
The Main character does too.
no fooling our girl, she sees true
grind your teeth and rip your skin
She sees you fiend

Tearing at your soul that her you could not have
You spun your lies and brought down an innocent
Your guile is astounding, your heart cold
try as you may , you will not conquer
her that you want most to fill your vacant soul
She is pure of heart pure of soul
You shant cast your spell on her
She is beyond your sin,
The lady is Queen.

Nice job, girlie.

Why thank you missy!!

Your sadness is evident for nothing fullfills
all your deeds return no thrills
smile desert left in your wake
many are seeing just how fake
Leave it alone, nothing will do
For SHE knows me and will not treasure you.

as the truth comes out your "many" confidants fall wayside
so busy pushing forward, look back you'll be alone.
The Pride was right with her warning
be careful, she said, she is evil.
Now I see with mine own eyes,
just how it erupts within.
It eats at you, darkness revealed
Power and control is your only intent
feeding off the goodness of others
your mode of decent.

Good writing LJ.. I have no clue about who you're writing, but you can sure write..

I did have someone in mind , reading it, that's why I like it.. someone I know ( a Dutch ex-friend)

Thank You Dutchy!! Bet it's the same person!! lmfao!!

and so my proof is written
my Queen is aware
got you in her sites
phony beware.
no more fake concern for others
no more pretending to be a fan
the light shines upon you vampire
you burn to a cinder in the ray of truth.
you've burned your last bridge
Karma is a beatch.

You def have somebody on your mind. Nice work though.