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I just wrote this poem. It's about drinking too much and drugs. This is not a poem about me, but just an observation of reality of living in excess.

Enough

"Man, hit me with another Tequila:
"No, you've had enough"

"Man, slide over another Beer"
"No, you've had enough"

Gazing cross-eyed at the Bartender I try to think straight,
wondering how much money I have in my jeans pocket

"Man, hit me with another Tequila:
"No, you've had enough"

"Man, slide over another Beer"
"No, you've had enough"

W T F where is my drivers licence and cash?
and why am I half naked in a hotel room?
Who the hell drove me here?

I feel funny..whoa things are looking really weird...
WTF is this needle doing on this table next to the bed?

"Man, hit me with another Tequila:
"No, you've had enough"

"Man, slide over another Beer"
"No, you've had enough"

Fighting the dizziness, I look down and see a rubber
band around my arm next to a needle mark.

As I pass out I think........
I've had enough


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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Good to see some work from yas!!!Not an easy topic to approach but you did it sparklingly, glad it's not about you!!



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Thanks Pen, it's Sooooooo good to be writing again!! Although this poem is not about me, as you know I have had my share of battles in regards to things of this nature in the past.

Thanks for reading! Big Grin


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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wildchild,

Thank you for sharing.





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welcome and thanks for reading!! Big Grin


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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Originally posted by wildchild:
welcome and thanks for reading!! Big Grin


Your welcome!!





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nice! Wink


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Why thanks!


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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EekerOH BOY...


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OH GIRL!! Razzer


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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Wildchild, I like this a lot. It would be Cool set to music, too.


______________________________


He still stands in spite of what his scars say
I’ll battle till this bitter finale
Just me, my dignity and this guitar case

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nobody has ever measured, even poets, how much a heart can hold.
— Zelda Fitzgerald


Nothing in life is to be feared, it is only to be understood. Now is the
time to understand more, so that we may fear less.
— Marie Curie


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Thank you phone and when I wrote it I was thinking the same thing. Big Grin


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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That's really deep WC, nice job!







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quote:
Thank you phone and when I wrote it I was thinking the same thing.

Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin .. Feels good, bein' on the LISA Wavelength!!!


______________________________


He still stands in spite of what his scars say
I’ll battle till this bitter finale
Just me, my dignity and this guitar case

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Nobody has ever measured, even poets, how much a heart can hold.
— Zelda Fitzgerald


Nothing in life is to be feared, it is only to be understood. Now is the
time to understand more, so that we may fear less.
— Marie Curie


~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
 
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Tankies Ms. Stacy! And LOL, phone. What exactly is the "Lisa Wave length" now? Wink


"Love me now or set me free-
I am trainwreck tangled simple
me. " ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You may not see me, yet you feel me. Your mind struggles to comprehend but is thwarted by ages of lies, who am I? I am you, I am your soul and I am simply me..Darcy"
 
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