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Clining to the desperation of what life has done, Seemingless annihilation, she thought he was the one, Instead he ripped her heart out and chopped it up in two, That boy of which she thought so much tore her life in two, and while they say you can't lose faith you just have to be strong, Her dreams had shattered, Her hope had burned, Her faith gone all along, She stared out the window as tears streamed down her face, Waiting for the day that a new life would take her place, and in all her sadness she jumped to save her soul, All of lifes tragedies had finally taken toll, As the wind ruffled her hair her thoughts all turned to him, and as she gasped for one last breath.... BLACK. This message has been edited. Last edited by: JuliaM711, |
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thank you i really wan't sure how to end it.
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I like it!!
http://eventful.com/demand/D0-001-000171050-1 Thank You Suzana For My Beautiful Avatar & Blend!!! http://www.myspace.com/mj_lmpgirl |
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thanks....im trying to get it published....i have poems on a website all cocpyrighted thankfully....hopefully it works out
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i still haven't heard from the site i submitted it to
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get up there
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